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catqueen13 August 13th, 2006, 3:09 pm

I love this story! <3

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daidaishar August 13th, 2006, 10:36 pm

aww, that was cute! Nice pretense, and well executed too.

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queen-medium August 15th, 2006, 7:03 pm

What a cute story! I really like it. ^-^

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nice and cute

kade (Guest) August 17th, 2006, 7:37 am

this is a a very nice and very cute webcomic! keep it up! [=

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war is a part of my life (Guest) August 17th, 2006, 3:14 pm

that is so cutei have read many that use a red string as its plot but none as cut as this one

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teurastaa August 20th, 2006, 11:58 pm

aaaw this is sooo greta. it's like sad and stuff and then it's so GREAT and happy and i love it so much I don't even know what to say! =3

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RHSDramaChick (Guest) August 23rd, 2006, 6:40 pm

I love it fathobbit! This piece definitely shows a different side of you. It's very moving. You should do more of these "short" ones!

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Jessica94 August 24th, 2006, 6:01 pm

very emo. cute though, like everyone says.

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Reiji September 5th, 2006, 6:18 pm

That was so adorable! I just love it... I just.. yeah, love it! It's so well-done!!! ^_^

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Ifriit

Guest September 10th, 2006, 5:25 pm

It's very beautiful. The introspective dialogue and reflections feel very warm and soothing, I wish there was a whole library with comics like this one. "Short and Sweet"! Beautiful use of font art too. Excellent job, I'd love to see more of stuff like this one. Keep it up.

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KK (Guest) November 3rd, 2006, 8:19 am

Too good....Never came across another story so good in delivering a cute message...Nice work.

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Hanaki November 6th, 2006, 4:11 am

that was a really good short story! i loved it ^^

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Jude K.A. Boi November 7th, 2006, 3:43 pm

omg, this is such a beautiful story! To bad it ends there...i do so dislike cliff hangers...X(...le grrr... but it's still really good...

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girl-in-the-rain December 2nd, 2006, 1:01 pm

beautiful, love the art and such a great story :)

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SutekiKage December 16th, 2006, 1:50 pm

aweeee...this story is awesome.

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cute

Parslie December 19th, 2006, 12:29 pm

That was cute^^ Nice story!

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Alleycat (Guest) January 14th, 2007, 2:05 pm

Omg!!! I <3 this story! its so short though...*sniffles*

y cant it go on forever??!

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Myra Kineoro February 11th, 2007, 9:32 am

Sooooo nice!!! Love it!!!

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Ginatus February 16th, 2007, 8:00 am

Nice story, but the art... Well, I don't think that you spent a lot of time with this one, it was quite sketchy and smudgy. The people on the train were cool, though ^^.

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CrimsonXDawn March 5th, 2007, 6:22 pm

I wish there was more. I can't help but wonder if it's by chance that her true love is on that boat or if he could see the string and couldn't stand not being able to find whoever was on the other end. *dies from curiosity*

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...so don't give up hope.

guest (Guest) March 10th, 2007, 9:20 am

That was great. It's like a poem, but with drawings. I love how her emo-ness is cut off by the sudden hope. Good job!

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Love it!

Ablepsy June 18th, 2007, 4:14 pm

Aw, this story was so sweet!
I love this page, it's so happy.
^__^
Like everyone else says, I think you should continue it XD

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Matilduh June 21st, 2007, 7:35 pm

awww this story is soo cute :]]i wish i could see red stringss

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Beloved_Sacrifice July 19th, 2007, 8:32 pm

AWWWW!
I wanna see red strings *3*

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love it

Nejoka August 29th, 2007, 12:28 pm

the ending is great

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Kokkoii-Matoku November 2nd, 2007, 12:01 am

Ho snap. that was beautiful and that had such a strong impact on me.
Wow...
YEY! i wonder who it is. ^w^
NICE STORY I luff it

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knee November 12th, 2007, 3:10 pm

Wow, I love this story! It was short but it got it's message across :] It is true that sometimes, you don't realize that the person you love is right next to you.

Very sweet story X3

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un3xpectedfate November 28th, 2007, 3:42 pm

Aww, that was soooo cute!!! Love the story.

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nnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

suzmya icigo January 14th, 2008, 2:17 pm

why do you end such a great story please add more or i'll be sad-.-

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Falco Vespertinus March 6th, 2008, 12:41 pm

Very poetic story, I love it <3

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That was actually kinda sweet

kirbyeverest April 13th, 2008, 7:55 pm

A bit of work needed to be done on the writiing, but sweet none the less.

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yo

punkgir_13 (Guest) May 15th, 2008, 11:03 am

this is like a goood story
i want to kno what
happens!! come on
mmmooooorrrrrrreeeeeee
i want to know who it
is mon!!!!!

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Scorpia Stingz August 8th, 2008, 5:36 am

what she said XD
actually more than that
it really is a nice comic
im not critisising it or anything
just that no one had any faces
which was pretty ok
everyone's got to have their own style right??
can u make another one??? plz?? XD
ur drawing is really nice XD

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That...was...

kitaxhaku August 18th, 2008, 10:44 am

AWESOME! You're very skilled at drawing, especially since you didn't draw the face, and was still able to express feelings through body motions and words. Awesome job!

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Avengeli September 26th, 2008, 3:02 pm

Sweeet.

And I like the absence of faces. It leaves a lot to the imagination. :)

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soinlove1313 December 23rd, 2008, 7:27 am

I love this! I just now read all of them and when I got to this page I was like 'nooo!' because thats all there was. Great job though. :)

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metal weirdo100 February 12th, 2009, 4:45 pm

all i can say is.....AWESOME! make more plz i wanna know wat happenz!

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Aw.... cute

shabalbaiggy April 15th, 2009, 10:33 am

What a sweet story.

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Jammix (Guest) June 17th, 2009, 9:41 am

short and Sweet! Was drawn in by the sheer simplicity of the story.
:)
Your style may be simple, and a little childish but it suits the mood and minimalism of the story so well!
I wish I could see what happens after that...